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Love Poem #7 – “Minstrel Man” by Langston Hughes

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Because my mouth
Is wide with laughter
And my throat
Is deep with song,
You do not think
I suffer after
I have held my pain
So long?
Because my mouth
Is wide with laughter,
You do not hear
My inner cry?
Because my feet
Are gay with dancing,
You do not know
I die.

Comment:

This was designated as a love poem and I guess it could refer to an unrequited secret love.

However, I think it would also apply to a person who is severely depressed   It reminds me of what happened with Robin Williams.

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Do you think this is a love poem?

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Love Poem #6 – “Ardella” by Langston Hughes

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I would liken you
To a night without stars
Were it not for your eyes.
I would liken you
To a sleep without dreams
Were it not for your song

Comment:

This is a beautiful description from the eyes of a soulful lover.

 

Love Poem #5 – “A Wooing” by Langston Hughes

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I will bring you big things:
Colors of dawn-morning,
Beauty of rose leaves,
And a flaming love.

But you say
Those are not big things,
That only money counts.

Well,
Then I will bring you money.
But do not ask me
For the beauty of rose leaves,
Nor the colors of dawn-morning,
Nor a flaming love.

 

Comment:

I think the lover is saying here that my love is priceless and I am willing to give it to you.   However, you choose material things and I can give those things, too.

But don’t ever ask for the best of me.

I guess there would be some who would consider this a bargain.

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Do you think “relational bargains” really occur?

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Love Poem #4 – “Fire-Caught” by Langston Hughes

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The gold moth did not love him
So, gorgeous, she flew away.
But the gray moth circled the flame
Until the break of day.
And then, with wings like a dead desire,
She fell, fire-caught, into the flame.

 

This poem tells us that sometimes the love we search for comes from an unexpected source.

The journey of the gray moth is moving as she patiently gives all for love.

I really like this one.

QUESTION(S):

Have you ever felt like the gray moth?

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Love Poem #3 – “Love Song for Antonia” by Langston Hughes

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If I should sing
All of my songs for you
And you would not listen to them,
If I should build
All of my dream houses for you
And you would never live in them,
If I should give
All of my hopes to you
And you would laugh and say: I do not care,
Still I would give you my love
Which is more than my songs,
More than any houses of dreams,
Or dreams of houses —
I would still give you my love
Though you never looked at me

This poem is clearly about unrequited love from the point of view of the rejected lover.   An example of this in the Greek tragedies is the story of Echo and Narcissus which you can read about by clicking the link below:

(http://myths.e2bn.org/mythsandlegends/userstory948-story-of-echo-and-narcissus.html)

Another example in classic fiction is Heathcliff and Isabella in Wuthering Heights which is one of my favorite stories depicting the complexities of LOVE.

 

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What are your thoughts about this poem?

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